feedback jeder art Hello Lina

[Carlos]

I can see that you 

like me 

are virtually visiting 

this place 

 

No much to see today 

right? 

 

We expect to find 

great poetry 

 

Children in Disney Land 

 

You are too young 

I am too old 

 

Some day you will find 

what you are looking for 

in yourself 

 

Perhaps 

you have 

already found it 

 

I'm just curious to know 

the change of time

 

 

 

 

[Lina]

Hello @Carlos,

I don't know if this poem is addressed to me, but I'll reply anyway (I hope my English is acceptable).

 

 

We visit virtual worlds
to see words of others
find meanings
sometimes
to ourselves

 

Poetry as an invisible passion connects
worlds of young and old

 

In search are many
with questionable end

 

time gives us wisdom
 

 

I think, you could address your lines to everyone here. We are all here to read, understand and learn poetry. Some of our worlds are closer to each other, others are not. I think age doesn't make much difference, because everyone brings thoughts that enrich the others.

Beautiful lines!

 

Greetings, Lina