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[Donna]

A curtain of snowflakes drifts 

The night sifts filigree snow 

Where does the homesick heart go? 

 

Lattice frost glitters on asphalt 

I breathe in cold air and halt 

 

Wind rushes through treetops 

Snow softly plops 

 

This Winter Wonderland, ice castle dream 

I exhale thankfulness, puffing steam 

 

Heart thudding

Serenity budding

 

Stamp.........stamp ........

stamp my feet 

Catch the rhythm of Winter's beat 

 

Feel the flow of blood surging

to face and ears 

A trickle of tears jeers, all those lost years 

 

Acrid, burning frozen skies 

The sadness of a hundred goodbyes

 

There isn't anything to criticize

I watch as time stands still yet flies

 

Your love,

here,

I recognize 

©Donna H.

January 26, 2023

[Donna]

Lieber @Herbert Kaiser,

Ich werkelte und änderte dieses Gedicht mindestens zehnmal bis ich zu diesem Ergebnis kam.

Freut mich dass es bei dir gut angekommen ist.

Liebe Grüße,

Donna