feedback jeder art Heart Wound

[Donna]

A heart wound that never heals.

Spinning-------spinning grief's wheels.

Time-----------to turn back tragedy's clock.

Yield, shield, and block.

 

Those lives, happy faces, futures erased.

Nothing reconciles when evil-based.

Cursing all gods for non-prevention.

Praising the Super Heroes intervention.

 

Rivers of tears flow endlessly.

Whole worlds destroyed, senselessly.

Forever paused......stopped in an instance.

Now, only memories mingle with pains indifference.

 

Enforced an unavailable, unattainable distance.

Never to touch or hold close again.

Shock, desperation, disbelief--------they condemn.

Everything changes without "Them."

 

A before and after begins.

Guilt and blames visions.

Why couldn't you keep them here?

It's happened--------your worst fear.

 

Though deep down you know.

Your power is limited.

Heart remains conflicted.

Lost-----a part of you that went with the beloved.

©Donna H.

May 25, 2022

(For: Uvalde, Texas)

[Porzellanschreibt]

Funny, how every poem I choose to click on is written by you. Funny, how long it takes for the wounds in our souls to heal, if ever…funny how our hearts work extra shifts, falling in love, instead of just pumping blood,  funny how words can relate mine to yours. 

[Joshua Coan]

@Silentlipsloudheart

 

Hinweis der Moderation: 

 

Kommentare sind in deutscher Sprache zu halten. 

Vielen Dank. 

 

mfG 

Das Moderationsteam

[Porzellanschreibt]

@Joshua Coan

Sorry, habe ich was falsches gesagt? Lesen sie meinen Kommentar, ist er nicht schön?!

Ich habe Sprache immer als Mittel zur Verbindung und Kommunikation betrachtet. Außerdem ist es ein englisches Gedicht. Ist das ein Regel? Ich frage mich warum