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[Donna]

When the day changed to the color of stained rain 

Our breath wept though love beat in every vein  

Eclipsed Souls divided, housed in chained disdain 

Not seeing past hurts and each other's pain 

 

Anger knows no forgiveness, dredging up blame 

I thought we were solid instead pride makes vain 

Neither closes the gap, this is insane 

Standing far apart; beneath us crumbling terrain 

 

Suspended seconds freeze, only I remain 

 

You abruptly turn ....... leave and don't explain  

Walking towards a new Spring your heart can rename  

In your wake, a cold shadowy membrane 

Abandoned, I shiver in Winter's refrain 

©Donna H.

April 11, 2023

[Uschi Rischanek]

Ach liebe Donna,

wenn wir nur immer so könnten wie wir wollten, unseren Gefühlen einfach ihren freien Lauf zu lassen...

Herzlich liebe Grüße zu dir!
Uschi