feedback jeder art When I feel like I'm alone

[TyaZ]

When I feel like I am alone
Is when the stress rings on the phone

 

When night becomes my afternoon
When the sun becomes the moon
When my reality becomes cartoon

 

When enjoyment becomes a cope
When the trust becomes a hope

 

When fear becomes conviction
When love becomes addiction

 

When compassion becomes a duty
When the pain becomes a beauty

 

When my grief becomes a clown
When everything seems upside down

 

Because my heart feels like a stone
That's when I feel like I'm alone
 

- TyaZ 2023

[Jan Fischer]

Hey TyaZ

Two thoughts occur in my mind 

Love as addiction- if you are your own best friend, you can not be addicted to anyone, but it took a long time for me to learn that.

And I realized- as much as I felt as an alien in this world, you are not alone, there are others who are like you, but seldom you meet them but then you will know you found very special person 

Thanks a lot for this poem

Jan

[TyaZ]

Lieber @Jan Fischer

 

Danke für deinen Kommentar! Wunderbar, schöne Worte, und eine für  mich wertvolle Erinnerung! Diese Dinge, kann man doch leicht wieder vergessen. Danke dir

[Joshua Coan]

@Jan Fischer

 

Hinweis der Moderation:

 

Kommentare sind in deutscher Sprache zu halten! 

 

mfG 

Das Moderationsteam

[Jan Fischer]

Ich darf auf ein englisches Gedicht nicht in Englisch antworten?

Das finde ich etwas seltsam aber okay