Bitter Taste Lovestory

[Leronyy]

das ist mein erstes englisches gedicht ;D ich würd mich freuen wenn ihr eure meinung und verbesserungsvorschläge da lassen würdet

 

Such much he loved her,

so much he thought that they’ll be together forever.

So he asked her the most important question,

but she ever left him in the wrong direction.

With a big smile on his face,

never thinking about the bitter taste,

hoping and loving he pulled out the ring,

but she threw it away and started crying,

showed him that his fight was for nothing.

 

This was the end of the nightmare,

And crucial thinking is unfair.

This story ends in memory of saints

and charlatans.