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danke, dass du dir die Mühe gegeben hast, dir meinen Text durchzulesen. Müsste ich denn schreiben wer der Gegner ist? naja ich versuche es mal zu verbessern

Open wound The burning sun came out as if it'd destroy my skin. The frozen snow melt and it was like a dripping. I saw the soldiers sank in a endless sorrow. 'Cause they didn't know that you're the enemy! Refr: My black blood flow, did you see my open wound? My passion drops below. It melts in my mouth. My beautiful black sparrow, we have to go our ways now. I'm lost. And it willl be a lonely death. 3x The dread has just begun, your surprise broke my heart. Yeah, you dragged me down and I suffered on and on. My confused ghost sank and there was no escape. 'Cause it didn't know that you're the enemy! Refr: My black blood flow, did you see my open wound? My passion drops below. It melts in my mouth. My beautiful black sparrow, we have to go our ways now. I'm lost. And it willl be a lonely death. 3X >The world will be an empty place and my dying will be slow..< LG :wink: