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[Carlos]

I can see that you 
like me 
are virtually visiting 
this place 
 
No much to see today 
right? 
 
We expect to find 
great poetry 
 
Children in Disney Land 
 
You are too young 
I am too old 
 
Some day you will find 
what you are looking for 
in yourself 
 
Perhaps 
you have 
already found it 
 
I'm just curious to know 
the change of time
 
 
 
 

 

[Lina]

Hello @Carlos,

I don't know if this poem is addressed to me, but I'll reply anyway (I hope my English is acceptable).
 
 
We visit virtual worlds
to see words of others
find meanings
sometimes
to ourselves
 
Poetry as an invisible passion connects
worlds of young and old
 
In search are many
with questionable end
 
time gives us wisdom
 
 
I think, you could address your lines to everyone here. We are all here to read, understand and learn poetry. Some of our worlds are closer to each other, others are not. I think age doesn't make much difference, because everyone brings thoughts that enrich the others.
Beautiful lines!
 
Greetings, Lina