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[Serenus]

Our perfect garden
 
We want to live in a perfect world
Everything to fit our perfect life
harmony in our garden
like feeling in paradise
Eden is so far away
we could not find it here to stay
Eden is so far away
we have to find another way
 
we waste the planet with plastic
and  fire the climate change
economy grows fantastic
and politics make some war arrange
We begin to grow like cancer
our business and finance is sick
floorsealing kills our garden
this is a mirror for our greed
 
Eden is so far away
we could not find it here to stay
Eden is so far away
we have to find another way
 
we live in different worlds
speaking different words
religion is a marketplace
but there is only one human race
So let us dream about eden
eden is a place for you and me
let`s bring out the seed of eden
from deep in our heart to see
 
There is a way to Eden
it is not far away
there is a way to Eden
living in a balanced way
So let us find a peacefull garden
and  cost of all of his fruits
mankind is going a long way
to find along her roots.
 
there is a way to Eden
it is not far away
there is a way to Eden
living in a balanced way

 

[Federtanz]

So let us dream about eden
eden is a place for you and me
let`s bring out the seed of eden
from deep in our heart to see
 

Lieber @Serenus Einfach sehr verträumt schön...ehrlich.
Freue mich auf mehr.
 
Danke.
 
 
Welcome !
 
 
 
Federtanz

 

[Serenus]

Liebe @Federtanz   
Danke für dein Feedback!
Bin erst seit zwei Tagen auf dieser Plattform, nachdem ich mir einige Poetry Plattformen angesehen habe, aber der respektvolle Umgang hier hat mich angesprochen.
Was ich bisher auch nicht bereut habe. 
 
mit lieben Grüßen
Serenus