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Alexander von Baden

Gast
Love is a drug
 
Intro:
Wandering through the day
my leg starts to shake
my hands are sweaty
and my fingers restless
I can't wait any longer
I have to see you
 
Refrain:
I'm in love with you
I'm addicted to you
addicted to the feeling
that your presense do
All night long I think of you
every day I'm dreaming too
Only you can give me that feeling
Only you make my breathe go free
Just hit it in my vains
give me what I need
 
Strophe1:
In the past I never knew
what this substance can do
That I really would need it
that I'd become so addicted
that these butterflies in my stomach
would create such tsunamis in my head
 
Refrain:
I'm in love with you
I'm addicted to you
addicted to the feeling
that your presense do
All night long I think of you
every day I'm dreaming too
Only you can give me that feeling
Only you make my breathe go free
Just hit it in my vains
give me what I need
 
-musikalische Einstellung; aufsteigend, hektische Melodie, gefolgt von Entspannung (psychodelisch, Anlehnung an 70er)-
 
Strophe2:
Coming out of my trashcan 
seeing the gray world turn bright
everything is possible 
I love my life
overwhelmed by my luck 
I just want you to be my wife 
this should never end 
This should be my life
 
-langsam wird die Melodie wieder hektischer-
 
Strophe3:
When I'm without you 
I feel powerless 
I am feeling blue
I would kill for this 
would die for this
would die for you 
Just to get another shot of this 
please give me a kiss 
 
Refrain:
I'm in love with you
I'm addicted to you
addicted to the feeling
that your presense do
All night long I think of you
every day I'm dreaming too
Only you can give me that feeling
Only you make my breathe go free
Just hit it in my vains
give me what I need
 
Strophe4:
You say it's toxic 
not worth it
that we don't deserve this
You don't want to cry
but if you are doing this 
deleting this 
putting me on rehab lists
all you really do is making me
die
 
Refrain:
I'm in love with you
I'm addicted to you
addicted to the feeling
that your presense do
All night long I think of you
every day I'm dreaming too
Only you can give me that feeling
Only you make my breathe go free
Just hit it in my vains
give me what I need
 
Refrain:
I'm in love with you
I'm addicted to you
addicted to the feeling
that your presense do
All night long I think of you
every day I'm dreaming too
Only you can give me that feeling
Only you make my breathe go free
Just hit it in my vains
give me what I need
 
 Hallo Alexander,
 
einen kleinen Fehler habe ich gefunden: Presence... Du hast es mit S geschrieben.
Mir gefällt sehr gut dein Gedicht, ich finde es sehr lustig. Auch die musikalischen Anweisungen.
Liebe Grüße
Carlos
 
 
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